October
28
Week #3
I run down the cold crisp road. Frost biting at my fingers. As I race down the rough, muddy road. Had to get away, I keep telling myself that. Had to get away . As I flung myself into the tree I always sit at. I could still hear the emergy alarm buzzing in the distance. The thick smoke filled the air. I tried to hold it back but..but I could not. In an instance my eyes teared up. It felt like hours just me and the cold crisp tree. I hear footsteps and a person breathing quickly. I looked up and it was my………
Dear Sydney,
Your writing is very detailed and specific. While I was reading It made me want to read more and more. In my mind, I created a mental picture based on your details.
Awesome work,
Alex
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